Look at the text below, which was written by an intermediate student. Underline and correct the 10 most important errors (in your opinion). Underline and tick 4 or 5 phrases or sentences that you think are correct.
Dear Mary,
How are you? In the last letter you asked me about my house and now I would answer you. I life in a small flat but it is very comfortable. Under my flat there is a big garage for to park the cars of the all family. In my house there are four rooms and four televisions, I have my own television in my bedroom. My bedroom is very small but for me is the best because there I can do all that I want, I watch the TV, I listen music, I study, I think that I am all the day closed in my room.
The kichen and the toilet have been repared two years ago, now it looks like new. But in my house it needs doing a lot of things. My house needs painting because the walls are very dirty. The window need to be repared and cleaned. The garage needs painting and changing the door. For me, the worst thing is that the washing machine needs reparing and now I have to do the washing up every day.
I don't remember to say you that in every room there are a lots of photos because my father is photographer and he likes doing photos.
I hope that you can go in my house someday and see it.
Best Wishes,
Nuria.
AIMS OF PART THREE
To find out if you have potential at analysing language.
To give you an initial insight into the kinds of language learning difficulties that our students have.
COMMENTS
When trying to identify mistakes, you could think about grammar, inappropriate vocabulary, spelling, punctuation etc
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